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Brock

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"The Adventures of Gash!"....I need some feedback
« on: January 03, 2005, 03:51:51 PM »
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Hey there.

Yes, I'm new.....but I'm writing this script, and while it's definitely still in-progress, and unfinished, I could really use some general feedback from any of you guys willing to read it. It's a bit of a read (about 80 pages so far) but I'd greatly appreciate even a partial review from anyone here.

xixax seemed to me like the best place to do this sort of thing, so here it is:
 
EDIT: Y'know what? I think it might be better to do what matt35mm did in his thread......

PM me if you seriously want to look through it and contribute some feedback.

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« Reply #1 on: January 03, 2005, 04:10:45 PM »
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I'll get down to it asap.

A sidenote:
Here's a free, easy-to-use PDF convert. I strongly recommended.
http://www.pdf995.com/

Brock

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« Reply #2 on: January 03, 2005, 06:38:59 PM »
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Quote from: kotte
I'll get down to it asap.

A sidenote:
Here's a free, easy-to-use PDF convert. I strongly recommended.
http://www.pdf995.com/


Thanks very much.

Oh, and as for the PDF thing, I'm not too worried about theft or unauthorized use. For one, I'm not sure many people around here would do something like that, and secondly, I've got a hundred different ways to prove this is mine if it ever came down to that.

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« Reply #3 on: January 04, 2005, 12:36:29 AM »
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I'm not talking about theft. PDF is so much cleaner and nicer...and it's the standard.
But that was just a tip.

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« Reply #4 on: January 04, 2005, 02:19:10 PM »
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Quote from: kotte
I'm not talking about theft. PDF is so much cleaner and nicer...and it's the standard.
But that was just a tip.


Ah, right....gotcha.

I may convert it when it's finished, that'd be a good idea. I'm also a bit weary about this just 'cause I've had some problems with Acrobat/Reader on my machine in the past...

...I'll be sure to keep that link for the future, though. It's bound to come in handy at some point, thanks kotte.

 

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