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Jake_82:
Since Greg shut down the board for no apparent reason without telling anyone in advance, I've come up with two very short scripts. These are both intended to be as short as possible so I can get them done without much work, and the second one is supposed to be under three minutes to qualify for a local student film festival thingy

http://www.oasisx.com/home.rtf

this one isn't too great but I just felt like writing something really quickly, thinking I would make it in December, but my main actress wasn't available so I'll probably put it off for a few months

http://www.oasisx.com/repair.rtf

I just wrote this last night, actually, and was thinking to myself "I wish I could post this on the PTA message board-- damn that Greg!" Much to my delight, I got that message in my email today so I can post this here. I tried to make it under three minutes, but it's about 5 minutes so I might have some difficulty, maybe have to cut some things out. Please  give me suggestions for this one, I'm really looking for feedback because I think the idea is good but it's kind of weak.

Thanks!

Xixax:

--- Quote from: Jake_82 ---Since Greg shut down the board for no apparent reason without telling anyone in advance, I've come up with two very short scripts.
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Heh. The way this was worded led me to believe that the scripts were ABOUT the PTA board.

That would be kinda funny. A 7 minute short about the gripping drama of losing the PTA board!

budgie:

--- Quote from: Michael_Wilson ---
That would be kinda funny. A 7 minute short about the gripping drama of losing the PTA board!
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I believe I have a treatment.

sphinx:

--- Quote from: budgie ---I believe I have a treatment.
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i think we should have a script contest, write an epic about the history of the boards.

MacGuffin:

--- Quote from: sphinx ---i think we should have a script contest, write an epic about the history of the boards.
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"Peace Out" is an epic in itself. Someone phone Charlie Kaufman.

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