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Re: my film "This Close or This Far"
« Reply #15 on: September 25, 2009, 06:06:55 PM »
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nice little story. very well shot. very well edited, though i would've cut around certain things.. i don't know how much footage you did or didn't have. that actress is excruciating. i really wish you could've recast. i agree the final moment with her is a little ambiguous. i think you were going for a punch to the face, which is WONDERFUL but i needed to see contact. maybe more of a sound effect of glove hitting face would do it. then it would be a certifiably fantastic ending. upon review, maybe it's that damned performance.. i don't know. it's SO CLOSE.

30 sec trailer - yeah i think brad's onto something with the dock... take the dialogue/soundtrack, put some shots over it, then right on the PUNCH cut to the title.

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Re: my film "This Close or This Far"
« Reply #16 on: October 18, 2010, 12:27:02 PM »
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fancy HD action.
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Re: my film "This Close or This Far"
« Reply #17 on: November 02, 2010, 12:43:16 PM »
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I can see this developing into a feature and going mainstream. "Love taps" starring Terrence Howard and Zooey Deschanel
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