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My Air Jordan Commercial

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on: May 24, 2008, 12:49:54 PM
Hey guys,

I directed a spec Air Jordan Commercial for my class.  Take a look:

http://vimeo.com/1060081



Constructive feedback is welcome.  Haters keep hating.  MD
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Reply #1 on: May 24, 2008, 01:06:03 PM
I enjoyed that. I just thought the people talking "are we gonna win" a little slow. But great work, I admire the quality.


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Reply #2 on: May 24, 2008, 01:39:42 PM
good writing, but really would've topped it off if you could video something spectacular in motion.  I mean, those are the funnest parts of shoe ads aren't they?
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Reply #3 on: May 24, 2008, 04:35:02 PM
hahaha...unfortunately the actor wasn't very good at basketball.  Thanks for the comments guys.  Mike
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Reply #4 on: September 12, 2008, 01:20:53 PM
Wow dude, really good. That short made me cream my pants.  :bravo:
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