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on: July 20, 2004, 11:27:36 AM
hey, I have been working on this 20-minute short for a little bit, and this is a little clip from the movie, about 20 megs.  I just need to know if it's any good or not.  If it's funny or just plain stupid.  Please be really honest, you know I can take it.

the movie is about a mango vendor who used to be a badass in china way back in the days, but now he's just selling mangoes.  the story takes a day in his life, he kinda falls in love, and these thugs who sell papayas try to shake him down.  this clip involves the first shakedown attempt (towards the end.)


obviously there are major problems concerning the picture and sound, but we're cropping it to widescreen and spiffying things up with magic bullet, and gonna clean up the sound too I guess.  but, really, feel free to tear anything apart.  I need to know.
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Reply #1 on: July 20, 2004, 12:30:41 PM
it's pretty stupid.. but i laughed.

so, whatever that means.
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