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NEON MERCURY

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« Reply #60 on: July 19, 2004, 10:29:10 PM »
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what about this one?...


the decoding of sin [v.2][/u]


if  i spread you  over concrete
and began  to suck the  gravity out of  your body
dont hesitate to  shatter my eyes

i  hold no judgements
i   give you a spiritual labotomy, a grievance and melting hands

inflict my senses
peel myself like layers of sandpaper dipped in silk...
it will never stop
please suffocate and implode me until i  evolve into mist.....
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« Reply #61 on: July 20, 2004, 10:35:31 AM »
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Quote from: NEON MERCURY
what about this one?...


the decoding of sin [v.2][/u]


if  i spread you  over concrete
and began  to suck the  gravity out of  your body
dont hesitate to  shatter my eyes

i  hold no judgements
i   give you a spiritual labotomy, a grievance and melting hands

inflict my senses
peel myself like layers of sandpaper dipped in silk...
it will never stop
please suffocate and implode me until i  evolve into mist.....


I was going to strip your poem of a few words to make the language sharper.  Then I realised that until I have a proper grasp of your message, it is not for me to change a single thing (it isn't anyways).  You create imagery really well NEON, but to make your images sharper and more precise... smaller words can be removed.  Nice job... once again.   :-D

And by the way, you are fucking brave!  I just typed out a little poem of my own and erased it as I criticized myself.  Cheers to NEON for having balls.
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« Reply #62 on: July 20, 2004, 01:42:33 PM »
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Cheers to NEON balls!!!  :-D
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« Reply #63 on: July 20, 2004, 01:49:19 PM »
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Cheers to NEON balls!!!  :-D


Remember, one is smaller than the other, so I think he just has one really big ball.
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« Reply #64 on: July 20, 2004, 04:03:34 PM »
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I once had a testicle hernia when I was 8. One of my nuts blew up to a fucking tennis ball. And it hurt like hell...  :cry:
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« Reply #65 on: July 20, 2004, 07:30:30 PM »
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i   and my ball say  thanks..... :yabbse-grin:
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« Reply #66 on: July 20, 2004, 09:57:21 PM »
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One of my nuts blew up to a fucking tennis ball.


Some people wait a lifetime for a moment like that.
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« Reply #67 on: July 23, 2004, 03:16:05 PM »
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I'm an 'all about the girl' type of guy in bed. Mainly because I fear being branded 'worthless' but also because it makes me feel good.

Are there any 'all about the guy' girls out there?
Today women are taught to demand in bed and guys to step back and give.
Know what a dead fish is? A girl who lies on her back letting the guy do all the work and dare call him a bad lay because he didn't make her come. Sound bitter? :) I'm just a frustrated boy learning how to fuck. It's not easy.
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« Reply #68 on: July 23, 2004, 06:24:20 PM »
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kotte, that was just awesome.
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« Reply #69 on: July 23, 2004, 07:01:06 PM »
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Fucking is easy, making love is hard. I mean, when it's fucking time, people just wanna do it, get over with it and come and then we can feel great that we fucked. When we make love, we really have to try hard and make our loved one feel like it's special. I'm an "all about the girl" boy, because I'm all about love. I'm into a 'hating the fuck' phase in my life.
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« Reply #70 on: July 23, 2004, 07:15:25 PM »
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Fucking is easy


Getting fucked is even easier
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« Reply #71 on: July 23, 2004, 08:16:15 PM »
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I'm into a 'hating the fuck' phase in my life.

I'm into the "I'll take either, please" phase now.
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« Reply #72 on: July 24, 2004, 02:15:31 PM »
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I'm an 'all about the girl' type of guy in bed. Mainly because I fear being branded 'worthless' but also because it makes me feel good.

Are there any 'all about the guy' girls out there?
Today women are taught to demand in bed and guys to step back and give.
Know what a dead fish is? A girl who lies on her back letting the guy do all the work and dare call him a bad lay because he didn't make her come. Sound bitter? :) I'm just a frustrated boy learning how to fuck. It's not easy.


I LOVE THIS POST!  I've found lately... since my "fucking phase" is over, that I've become a little different in the sack.  When you are randomly getting laid, as a female, I have found that it's all about the guy.  I think that's because when I was a lil promiscuous, it was largely due to a lack of self-esteem.  Therefore, I wanted to be "good" in bed.  I wanted to feel like I was worth screwing.

Now that I'm in the making love phase, it's all about the mutual pleasure.  But I must admit... it's easy to get spoiled and just lay back and enjoy...
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« Reply #73 on: July 24, 2004, 03:55:04 PM »
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Quote from: ElPandaRoyal
Fucking is easy


Getting fucked is even easier


A trip to the morgue is even easier.
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« Reply #74 on: July 24, 2004, 08:35:58 PM »
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Quote from: cronopio
Quote from: ElPandaRoyal
Fucking is easy


Getting fucked is even easier


A trip to the morgue is even easier.


I hope those last two aren't related ::gross::
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