New Script - Savant

Started by md, December 02, 2007, 02:53:56 PM

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md

Hey guys,

Wondered if you could give me feedback on a short I just wrote, entitled Savant.  Its four pages long and deals with pancakes and hash browns.  You can download a pdf here: http://www.rit.edu/~msd6154/scripts/savant.pdf 
"look hard at what pleases you and even harder at what doesn't" ~ carolyn forche

matt35mm

I think maybe Sam used to be named Will?  The name Will is still in there at parts and it was confusing for a little moment.

Anyway, I don't have any particular comments about the script--I just wanna see the movie!  There's really nothing else I can think of to say about it... there's not exactly a lot to delve into.  So I just want to see the movie.  MOO VIE!  MOO VIE!  MOO VIE!

md

Thanks for the heads up Matt, I uploaded the wrong file.  Will was his original name, but Sam sounded better. ar(g)hhhhhh
"look hard at what pleases you and even harder at what doesn't" ~ carolyn forche