my film "This Close or This Far"

[picolas]

*spoils*
nice little story. very well shot. very well edited, though i would've cut around certain things.. i don't know how much footage you did or didn't have. that actress is excruciating. i really wish you could've recast. i agree the final moment with her is a little ambiguous. i think you were going for a punch to the face, which is WONDERFUL but i needed to see contact. maybe more of a sound effect of glove hitting face would do it. then it would be a certifiably fantastic ending. upon review, maybe it's that damned performance.. i don't know. it's SO CLOSE.

30 sec trailer - yeah i think brad's onto something with the dock... take the dialogue/soundtrack, put some shots over it, then right on the PUNCH cut to the title.

[pete]

fancy HD action.

[Reel]

I can see this developing into a feature and going mainstream. "Love taps" starring Terrence Howard and Zooey Deschanel