story telling

Started by blu, April 08, 2003, 12:14:37 PM

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blu

there are lots and lots of talented thinkers, but few who can relate their thoughts to a story.  so much is lost between the thought to the page and then so much more is lost from the page to your eyes.  don't just think someone can just dream and make real.  it takes strength and it's when you get weak, that's when the dream is lost.  pdl had some great thinking to it, but most was lost in transit.  granted there are some "ooooo's" and "gee that's swell" but, in telling the story, it lacked.  it's like being a vegetarian and explaining that by eating gummy bears.  gummy bears are made from animals, dipshit.

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blu

i said the story wasn't told very good.  the ideal got lost in all the wit. witty, yes.  story, lost.  story told badly.  bad story line.  great sound and cinematography and actors, but story was sacrificed.

RegularKarate

SIR!  Please put down the grudge!

blu

there is no grudge.  it's just that some people, not just pta, think it is better to be  considered smart via insecurities induced by a cryptic story line.  you got people in the audience going, "why don't i get it?"  "i must not be creative enough to understand the rambling plot of a weak story line."  it gives the emperors new clothing a modern day twist.  after seeing the movie quite a few times, i gotta say the only thing special about the movie are the people and technologies employed, not some special vision or ideal.  that was lost.  lost in the pockets of a egoist rambling nonsensicle emperor who likes to walk around in the nude and laugh at the general populace while they exclaim how beautiful and visionary the clothing he is wearing is.  

i guess my question i was hoping to discuss here is are we telling a story with cinema or are we going for something else?  personally, i think we tell stories with film.  all else is jackass or advertising.

RegularKarate

I can see how you could apply what you're saying to other films, but PDL is simplistic... There's nothing completely crazy in it where you could just say "I just don't get it" as far as the story goes... I mean people could possibly not understand why he chose to tell the story in the way that he did, but the story is pretty straight forward... Maybe you don't like it... that's fine, but it seems like you're accusing us of pretending to see something in it that we don't just so we don't look dumb in front of others.

We can do a lot of things with film... PDL tells a story, there's no denying that, but there are different ways of going about telling a story... why does it have to just be a straight forward story... if that's what you want all the time, watch more television.

SoNowThen

Both must be equally great. I used to think story was the only thing that mattered, but after seeing Mamet direct (utter shit) I realized that you need great pictures and sounds to accompany the story. Hence, Paul Schrader scripts are better in the hands of a visual director like Scorsese (although I really like Schrader-directed films, they don't come close to Taxi Driver or Raging Bull).

That being said, I do agree that PDL didn't quite do it for me like Boogie Nights or Magnolia did. That seems to be a taboo thing to say around here, but that's what I felt.

As an after-thought: I read a PTA quote where he said "for better or worse, Magnolia will be the best film I ever do". I think that could be true.
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cine

I'm just jumping in but I would say even "Jackass" has a story.. its a story of several jackasses doing jackass stunts. and its a funny fuckin' story.

I would revise your statement to "we tell stories with film, and put advertising in the middle."

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cine

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Quote from: SoNowThenAs an after-thought: I read a PTA quote where he said "for better or worse, Magnolia will be the best film I ever do". I think that could be true.

I think he has since ammended that view after PDL. Or so I seem to remember someone saying so. I think it was Greg.
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I don't think the story of PDL was intended to be in depth....just like the love displayed, it was simple.  For the depth you had to look into Barry's character.  I would agree, the story wasn't anything spectatular, but I don't think Paul intended it to be.  The film flowed on many other things than the plot.  

The Mise-en-scene (look it up) value PDL had was almost as good as it gets.......

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cowboykurtis

I thought PDL was wonderful. I do think it was his worst film, however it did something that very few current films can do, it made me feel. i was fully engaged with the characters, and felt wonderful when i walked out -- i was so happy and couldnt say why. yes, teh screenplay is remedial from a traditional standpoint, by no means is it a masterpeice. i think his ohter film are on a whole different frequency -- but, he was trying something different -- and i thought it was breathing with life  and had a frenetic energy that jumped off the screen. however i must say the second time i saw it, i didn't feel those feelings again -- i became very aware of the "filmmaking" which ruined it for me. i see it almost like a magic act, the trick is never as impressive the second time.
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